the day was 31/07/2020 8:59 pm
Wheres my tea screamed Obi. The yearning chef walks in with Obi’s tea and his crown why were you so late said Obi. I i had to clean ah the soccer goals. And also where’s my crown or what i have to wear on the news break thing. I just put it next to you. May be its on the ground said the chef. Quick question what said Obi why do you have no pants on? Then the crown erupted with laughter stop embarrassing me and go and get the turbulent crown said Obi
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Hi Oliver, your writing is generally good. It could be better if you add some “quotation marks” to indicate their sayings. Keep on writing! J.